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Dying Within... by Marija343 Dying Within... by Marija343
I just feel so sad :( So I came up with this...
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GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Professional Writer
I love this! I believe many artist struggle with these feelings everyday, it is why we can describe so well, we feel so intensely. You describe this feeling perfectly. I connect with it on many levels of my own suffering. Kudos. I love it! I will fav it forever!
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
I'm so glad you can connect with my words cuz I think it's the essence of poetry...the essence of literature itself! Even though my words are sad and depressive, it's nice to know that in the battle with the world I'm not the only one struggling...that gives me strength!
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KahoriShigemitsu Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww...it's so sad... :(
...i feel so every day...:saddummy:
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
:iconsympathyplz:
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KahoriShigemitsu Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank u :cling:
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RyuyuRose Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student General Artist
Amazing poem..... It really speaks to me..... I've been going through such a deep hole of depression and i just don't know how to get out.
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
I'm sorry you feel that way :(
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RyuyuRose Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student General Artist
:) Don't be. It'll pass eventually. It always does.
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limefrog2498 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
great poem it really speaks to me
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
Thank you ^^
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baal-the-dementor Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
this is amazing like all youre work i love it all i comment and fav all that i have read you are truly an amazing poet :huggle: :hug: :tighthug:
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011
Thanks a lot for commenting and faving all my work :tighthug: I really don't know what to say :iconblushesplz:
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baal-the-dementor Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
your welcome i just finished reading the new one :huggle: its amazing again
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BlueQueenDragon Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Your thouhts speak of those I have carried since I was small. I used to writepoems to help me though and now I draw, no wait, I dooddle. I try to han on to something that I do not expect love in return but whom I can love all I want. Some people find a pet, others a friend or a child. Some find a charity or organization to pour out what we all have inside, the capacity to love unconditionally. I am lucky. I hang on to what I have but I aways have these thoughts. Anaquaintance tells me I am easily discouraged. It really is not that. I have had so much throuwn at me from an ealy age that my cup is full of negatie things. Consequently, a small set bak throws me right back into an abyss. Your poems are beautiful and very intense. I am glad you have kindness inyour heart to credit the artist though the drawing in the web are mostly nameless. I too fin many pictures that I can relate to for my wallpaper to deal with how I feel that day. Keep writting, do not stop, you have the ability to give a voice to your thoughts. I lost that a long time ago. Will be checking for more of yur work. Best wishes.
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011
Thanks for a beautiful comment :tears: You make me feel proud! I will deffenetly continue writing :D
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BlueQueenDragon Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The thanks are for you. you put a voice where I lost mine and it is through yours that I can 'say' "yeah, that's how I feel inside". Lots of love and best wishes and thank you for the reply.
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synesthesicchick Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
good god... that's me in a nutshell!
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
lol :D
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jimmo0jambo Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
well sure i like it..... the poem and your feelings are same as mine when i am sad too
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011
I'm glad you like it :meow:
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jimmo0jambo Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
wow
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
"wow" in what way? ^^; I hope you like it :)
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QueenBlues Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
aww :tighthug:
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
You're always so supportive! Thanks :huggle:
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QueenBlues Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
no problem :tighthug:

anyway I hope u feel better now :D
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
:glomp: :hug: :huggle: :tighthug:
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QueenBlues Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
aww :D :tighthug: :huggle:
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Rosii-chan Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You should credit the picture to its original owner since you didn't draw it.
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
I would if I knew who the original drawer is ^^;
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hopeisakittyninja12 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Student Writer
Love the poem! :)
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
Awwww! Thankies :hug:
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hopeisakittyninja12 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Student Writer
Your welcome! :) :hug:
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Galm03 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
did you made the drawing??????

if you did, you made a great work... thumbs up
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
No :( I found it on google ^^; Sorry... I hope you like the poem :)
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Galm03 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
that`s a masterpiece, looks like i found a great literature teacher XD

but... why are you sad?... sadness is not good for the health XD
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
Awwww :) Thanks :huggle:

I don't really feel wanted here anymore,that's why I'm sad...
But I always feel better when I put my saddness on the paper :D
I hope you like my other poems too :)
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Galm03 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i always let the sadness flow in the pillow...
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011
That works too xD
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Galm03 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
but i unleash a deathly combo at the pillow when i`m sad... when i`m sad my sadness transforms on rage XD
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
O_O That can be dangerous xD
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