The actual poem is good, but I have a lil' aesthetic quibble - the first line is readable, but it is a bit distracting. What if you changed the text to the same color as the one you used in the final line?
I agree, it would be more readable that way. But I kind of think that red letters on black background give it that "dark look" it should have. But changing it wouldn't be so bad either Thank you for the advice