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Dirt... by Marija343 Dirt... by Marija343
A poem requested by :iconvelvet-o-matic:

Please comment and share your impressions :)
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TheParaddict Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013   General Artist
Wow sad and touchy at once but really good rhyming though :D (Big Grin) 
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
I'm glad you came to like it ^_^
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TheParaddict Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013   General Artist
Np!
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baal-the-dementor Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I always love your poetry, even though it's usually sad
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
Yes, it is ^^; But this was requested, so if it's too sad it's not only my fault xD
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insomaniac55 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013   Writer
The actual poem is good, but I have a lil' aesthetic quibble - the first line is readable, but it is a bit distracting. What if you changed the text to the same color as the one you used in the final line?
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
I agree, it would be more readable that way. But I kind of think that red letters on black background give it that "dark look" it should have. But changing it wouldn't be so bad either :)
Thank you for the advice :D
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XxDarkanimexX Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I LOVE THIS
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Marija343 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
I'm glad ^^ Thank you :)
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XxDarkanimexX Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome
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